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"SOMEBODY KILL ME"

He screams and runs to the wall, blood flowering from his frosted fingers, something pounds on the edge of time...

"FOR I CANNOT. I CANNOT. I CANNOT."

What do you do when it is horror that grips you?
What is there but shame and ice?
What is there to be spoken?
To touch and warm?
To feel?

He feels nothing.
He runs blindly.
He is CORPSE.
BLOOD
BARON
BONE

DEATH.
©2008-2009 ~Albus-flavored-bean
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:iconromancing-the-broken:
The structure was very intriguing.
Word choice was okay, but good tone.
Nice job.^_^

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:iconalbus-flavored-bean:
Haha- thank you. ^^

Not one of my best, I'll agree with you; but I was feeling poem-esq.

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You're welcome.^-^
(And, I might be of the two percent that hasn't tried smoking pot, do I really have to copy and past that into my signature)

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:iconalbus-flavored-bean:
Haha- don't worry about it, I'm not going to force you. I'll take you're word for it. ^^

Anyway- nice username. ^^

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Thank you.^-^
I like yours too.
'Albus-flavored-bean' It's so cute.^^

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:iconalbus-flavored-bean:
Haha- I try. ^^

So... you're a romance-writer? Any particular reason this genre appeals to you? ^^

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Romanticism is diverse.^-^
I enjoy it.

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I'm more of an action-adventure person myself: but I've got a thing for characters who are in searing-emotional agony (I like the pity factor), and romance generally fills that description... ^^

So: your work, are they all one-shots, or do you have on going plots in all of your deviations?

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Well, I have plots in just about everything but my poetry.

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